Wherein I Describe The Walls Of
An Abandoned Warehouse
(a love poem)
Gray on blue, rusty,
the slight angle already creeping in,
rain on the tin
different from the rain
on the deteriorating asphalt,
dented, each dent
having its own history
which we can not know,
each dent figuring in the destruction
of energy, which even now
still flows through the building
no matter how minute,
yet it affects this poem,
it becomes part of it,
I am unable to stop it
from making the jump
from the warehouse to my mind
and now it has made
its way to your mind,
to your thighs.
6 Comments:
"having its own history
which we can not know"
I love this
and especially how you connect the energy of the abandoned warehouse to the poem.
I love this poem. You are painting a portrait with words.
Esmeralda Bernal
Thanks,anisa.
And,thank you,esmeralda.
Reyes, if I had tequila I'd pour a drop to celebrate - instead I'll use vodka which is closer to hand. you make a small verse significant in the humble way you use imagery, and I am vastly impressed... Ivan
Hello,Ivan,and thanks.Hope those wild fires were well south of you.
a winner!
Becky
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