Like Two Ships In The Night
first time we met
we kissed on that college parking lot
it was love at first sight
and then we parted
lost each other
found each other
denied each other
dreamt those separate but equal dreams
where like two ships in the night
we collide over and over again
the sea of love
churning and foaming
and gathering strength
against our hulls
4 Comments:
I really love this. Thank You for this poem. awesome.
Rebecca
I think this is lovely. If I could offer one suggestion - change 'and like two ships in the night' to 'where like two ships in the night' and see what you think.
Thanks,Bexicana.
Thanks,Jim.
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